A second round of thoughts on some work I’m doing hits the inbox:
Take the Strunk and White principle of “less is more” and apply it mercilessly and see what the outcome is.
I look left, and on the second shelf up find the reference. It’s the Third Edition, which I bought used from the university bookstore more than two decades ago.
Several years back I myself suggested The Elements of Style to someone. They told me they didn’t have time to read any books.
I at once took that as a “screw you” and that they didn’t care much about what they were creating either. You can surmise how it turned out.
I look at my latest piece, immediately recognizing exactly where my critic is coming from.
Then I decide I’d rather not make the same mistake.